June 13, 2008

IF: Punchline, A Poem for Jocelyn ..

He said, "I write a lot of poems."

"Can I read some of them?" I ask.

He said, "No. I don't show them to anyone."

I said, "Just one? Can I read just one? Please!"

He said, "You are just so curious, aren't you. Just like a cat."

Yes, I think, I am just like a cat that way.

After much thought he says, "I will write a poem for you, ok?"

"Will you let me read it?" I ask hopefully.

He said, "Maybe."





The epilogue ...

Today I sit here in this vast land of my king size bed wearing nothing but his soft blue t-shirt.
I twirl the silver bracelet he gave me in the palm of my hand.
Something always brings me back to him.

Could be that there is still a scent of him left behind in his shirt.
Or could it be the mystery of that poem he promised me?
The one I never got to read.

And now that he is gone, I realize the punchline might have just killed me.



The Tart
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13 comments:

ian russell said...

sweet story, great image!
thanks.

Flying Colors said...

Beautiful image and touching narrative.
Best to you!

Kate said...

Oh. : ( That is a sad punchline.

But a beautiful image.

gautami tripathy said...

Maybe the other way..

paisley said...

sometimes the sentiment of a poem that remains unwritten,, or in this case left unread, can be more intimate than one that is shared...

chin up..

frank h. said...

very nice image
I like that cat specially

:o)

Greg said...

At least you have eight lives left.

danni said...

i hear sadness, but i guess sometimes we just be better off left in the dark to make of things what we'd choose

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Love the twist that keeps one hanging on.

Blessings,
Linda

IN MY FATHER’S FIELD, at Nickers and Ink

Tony Sarrecchia... said...

Wow. Sad punchline--quite the twist to where I thought that was going. Great image.

Steve said...

Maybe you did read it just never knew it.

Forever Young said...

jocelyn is my name...interesting....

Alina Chau said...

pretty!